Thursday, August 23, 2012

My Room

The fuzzy fluff of my cat swirls around my bedroom, my wall covered with flowers like millions of fields filled with daisy. My teddies all huddled up in one bunch like they want a friend. The sun shines through the open windows and lightens up my room like a torch in my eyes. My old draws sit at the back corner like it's been in detention for years.


My creaky door swings open and shut as the wind blows against it harshly. My things scattered thin and wide over my desk like they are having a party and taking over my room and of course my kitten sleeping quietly at my side, purring away like she is having a daydream. This is definitely my room!




14 comments:

  1. Amazing Tash.
    You did some great describing and also some great smilies!
    What a great pic.
    Well done:)

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    1. Thanks Floss!
      It wasn't the best picture of my room, it was a bit dark!

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  2. Great tash!
    I like all your senses and
    a picture of your room!
    Alexandra.

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  3. Amazing Tash. I love your writing it so good and very well discribed.

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  4. Cool Natasha.
    Awesome job with describing your room.
    And a cool picture too.
    From Brody.

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  5. Cool I like how you have described every thing even your cat

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  6. Amazing Tash.
    I love the words that you used.
    Great Similes.
    Keep up the GREAT work.
    WELL DONE:)

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  7. Wow! That was a big wave simile , pro nouns it's all in there! Keep up the good work.

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