The fuzzy fluff of my cat swirls around my bedroom, my wall covered with flowers like millions of fields filled with daisy. My teddies all huddled up in one bunch like they want a friend. The sun shines through the open windows and lightens up my room like a torch in my eyes. My old draws sit at the back corner like it's been in detention for years.
My creaky door swings open and shut as the wind blows against it harshly. My things scattered thin and wide over my desk like they are having a party and taking over my room and of course my kitten sleeping quietly at my side, purring away like she is having a daydream. This is definitely my room!
Amazing Tash.
ReplyDeleteYou did some great describing and also some great smilies!
What a great pic.
Well done:)
Thanks Floss!
DeleteIt wasn't the best picture of my room, it was a bit dark!
Great tash!
ReplyDeleteI like all your senses and
a picture of your room!
Alexandra.
Thanks Alexandra!
DeleteAmazing Tash. I love your writing it so good and very well discribed.
ReplyDeleteThank you Amy!
DeleteCool Natasha.
ReplyDeleteAwesome job with describing your room.
And a cool picture too.
From Brody.
Thanks Brody!
DeleteCool I like how you have described every thing even your cat
ReplyDeleteThanks Rhys!
DeleteAmazing Tash.
ReplyDeleteI love the words that you used.
Great Similes.
Keep up the GREAT work.
WELL DONE:)
Thanks Hannah!
DeleteWow! That was a big wave simile , pro nouns it's all in there! Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteThanks Zeb!
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