Friday, May 25, 2012

Blob

I dash past the wiggle blob and made my way to the other end of the dance floor . “Help” Felicity screamed. She now made the line expand into one big swarm of green slime. It was heading for me. I swerved around and run like the world was breaking behind me trying to dodge all the people shouting and screaming, but sadly I got the disease and I couldn’t let go of the monster. It was terrible, I was now officially a green, slimy, alien.

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  1. Hi Tash
    Love the green blob writing .What is it like being an alien ? and what happened to Felicity?

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    1. Thanks Dad!
      We were doing fitness and felicity just join on to the blob. It was cool being the blob its a really fun game!

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  2. Awesome Tash.
    Your blob writing is great, my favourite part is the starter because you have a lot of action verbs.
    What is your favourite part of the story?

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    1. Thanks Parris!
      My favourite part was when I said the world was breaking behind me.

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  3. Awesome story Natasha. I like the end of your story when you said I was now officially a green, slimy, alien.

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    1. Thanks Josh!

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    2. 'Officially' is a great adverb to use here.

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