Monday, March 5, 2012

Weather Bomb

“Bang” a tree smashed onto the ground. Rain crashed against the window like bolts, the wind blew like it was trying to take over the garden. I could not believe my eyes it was like world war 3. I was watching the trees fight like soldiers against the windy wind. Suddenly I saw a tree bobbing around the place like one of those bobbing heads. Dad swooped down the rails like a airplane and grabbed a rope out of the garage. He came out of the garage and tied the rope to the tree that was wobbly and put the rope over a stronger tree. Dad gave me the thumbs up and swooped back in to land.
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8 comments:

  1. Great writing about the storm tash.What do you think the wind speed was?It was a very busy day for the fireman.Well done!

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    1. I don't know but I bet it was fast.Yes it was a busy day for the fireman.
      Thanks

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  2. Tash that is a great story you used describing I like it.

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  3. Another great piece of writing Tash.Well done
    Dad

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  4. I like how you have used that simile
    rain crashed against the window like a bolt.

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  5. The verbs and the similes that you use really paint a picture in the reader's mind of what is happening, Natasha. Reading your writing is quite a thrill!
    Were you proud of your Dad for saving the day?

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    1. Thanks
      Yes I was proud of my Dad because it was a nice tree he saved:]

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  6. tash Awesome bit of writing and it painted a very clear picture Wow Eden

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