tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post6060229589480509653..comments2023-07-01T21:58:46.035+12:00Comments on Natasha: Weather Bombsimonhhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17989091116360132352noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-50590232564636830132012-03-19T09:58:31.522+13:002012-03-19T09:58:31.522+13:00tash Awesome bit of writing and it painted a very ...tash Awesome bit of writing and it painted a very clear picture Wow EdenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-72381011627006837442012-03-08T08:47:12.064+13:002012-03-08T08:47:12.064+13:00Thanks
Yes I was proud of my Dad because it was a...Thanks <br />Yes I was proud of my Dad because it was a nice tree he saved:]Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-52277134469579690232012-03-07T20:45:13.392+13:002012-03-07T20:45:13.392+13:00The verbs and the similes that you use really pain...The verbs and the similes that you use really paint a picture in the reader's mind of what is happening, Natasha. Reading your writing is quite a thrill!<br />Were you proud of your Dad for saving the day?Mr Moriartyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14362859834913417326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-64244430843722399802012-03-06T20:03:21.456+13:002012-03-06T20:03:21.456+13:00I like how you have used that simile
rain crashed ...I like how you have used that simile<br />rain crashed against the window like a bolt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-90597160458841299702012-03-06T16:34:21.058+13:002012-03-06T16:34:21.058+13:00Another great piece of writing Tash.Well done
DadAnother great piece of writing Tash.Well done<br />DadSimonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-31980638256990150572012-03-06T09:05:25.673+13:002012-03-06T09:05:25.673+13:00Tash that is a great story you used describing I l...Tash that is a great story you used describing I like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-39173893666350750252012-03-06T07:31:37.129+13:002012-03-06T07:31:37.129+13:00I don't know but I bet it was fast.Yes it was ...I don't know but I bet it was fast.Yes it was a busy day for the fireman.<br />ThanksAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-38721101103061150622012-03-05T18:07:17.697+13:002012-03-05T18:07:17.697+13:00Great writing about the storm tash.What do you thi...Great writing about the storm tash.What do you think the wind speed was?It was a very busy day for the fireman.Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com