Thursday, July 26, 2012

Alone Robot

A Lone Robot                                                                                                      

Hi my name is Lily Pop, I am from a country far far away from here, nothing like this just junk and things people didn't want. I was made to crush things, destroy anything in my path but I am nothing like that. I am a kind hearted girl that likes to make people feel happy. At home there was nothing for me, no friends, no houses nothing so that's why I am here looking for a new home and this is just the right place for me. My eyes are blue just like my Mums, but she past away a few years ago and my Dad got killed awhile back by a car. Everybody left after that looking for new homes and places, but not me. For a few months I didn't know what to do? Sit in a pile of junk or find a new home. I followed my heart and left.


Your place is beautiful it’s filled with trees, birds, bugs and plants. I never seen anything more spectacular, what would be better then to leave here? I’m a bit of a chatterbox aren't I words just spill out of my mouth like a waterfall. All I really wanted to say is will you be my friend?



 Lily Pop


Here is a link to the video!

14 comments:

  1. Cool Natasha. I like how you put a picture of Lilly Pop in. Why did you decide to choose to make a friend for the one robot?

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    1. Thanks Tyler!
      It sound really fun and guess what, it was.

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  2. I didn't like it Natasha, I loved it! I love how you made a drawing of her! I like how you described the forest, that was my favourite part, what was yours?

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    1. Thanks Kharn!
      Great comment by the way:)
      I liked the start the best!

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  3. Amazing Tash.
    I love your writing because you have discribed Lilly Pop.

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  4. WOW Tash this is an amazing story well done Lilly Pop is such a classic name it was almost as if I was with her in the story its so cool that you put the video on their too I hope you revive lots of more comments you deserve it

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    1. Thank you, I really appreciate it!
      You are very kind:)

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  5. Great Natasha
    Your writing describes what you are. You are all the things that are in the story. I like the screenshot you put of the video too. What made you think of this marvellous piece of writing?

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    1. Thanks Katrina!
      It was one of the choices and I thought it would be cool to do her with her own back up story:)

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  6. Lovely Tasha! Your letter is so cool. I love all the awesome adjectives in it too. The pictures are so cool. GREAT JOB!:c)

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  7. Cool story Tash
    I like how you intressing words.
    Alexandra.

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