tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post7052908245060854889..comments2023-07-01T21:58:46.035+12:00Comments on Natasha: The Eye simonhhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17989091116360132352noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-50333490660175632172012-11-11T20:57:41.482+13:002012-11-11T20:57:41.482+13:00Thanks Thea!
I liked every part of your comment, I...Thanks Thea!<br />I liked every part of your comment, I will diffidently check out your blog.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-82165911031074619492012-11-08T09:12:31.072+13:002012-11-08T09:12:31.072+13:00Awesome story Tash!
I love the way your wrote it u...Awesome story Tash!<br />I love the way your wrote it using great descriptive words and paragraphs!<br /><br />I really like the end bit where you were on the newspaper and you threw it in the bin so your Mum wouldn't find it. I also like the beginning where you described the beach. Oh, and the middle bit where you were running to the lifeguard place with the eye in your hand...<br />I like all of it really!<br /><br />It kinda grossed me out a bit too the bit were you had blood running down your shirt.... Ewwwww! No wonder your Mum was mad!<br />Oh yeah, I know what you mean when you say you get a rash when you paddle in the water. It's true!!! That always happens to me! It's so annoying and usually really itchy afterwards. <br /><br />Anyway, the story was actually quite realistic, the way you wrote it I mean. You would usually get itchy after having a swim and people would usually be on the beach on a sunny day and your Mum would be angry if you ruined your top.<br /><br />Keep it up!Theahttp://pridethea.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-36370764857789457352012-10-31T18:24:29.688+13:002012-10-31T18:24:29.688+13:00Thanks Jake!Thanks Jake!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-54445143528954265622012-10-31T18:24:05.526+13:002012-10-31T18:24:05.526+13:00Thanks Parris!
The start where I am describing the...Thanks Parris!<br />The start where I am describing the beach. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-15088192663755168372012-10-31T09:16:06.162+13:002012-10-31T09:16:06.162+13:00Awesome story Natasha, I like how you used the wor...Awesome story Natasha, I like how you used the words oozing and scrunched! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-21620041191091525572012-10-22T19:42:03.821+13:002012-10-22T19:42:03.821+13:00Magnificent Tash!
This piece of writing is outstan...Magnificent Tash!<br />This piece of writing is outstanding. I can really get a picture in my head.<br />I especially like the end, What is your favourite part?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-32387847173090093742012-10-22T18:34:07.735+13:002012-10-22T18:34:07.735+13:00Thank you!
No! it was actually a true actual on ki...Thank you!<br />No! it was actually a true actual on kiwi kids news. We had to pretend it was us that had found the eye:) http://www.kiwikidsnews.co.nz/template-styles/item/2043-giant-eye-washes-up-on-beach/2043-giant-eye-washes-up-on-beachAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-56342981853510991012012-10-22T18:29:06.399+13:002012-10-22T18:29:06.399+13:00Thanks Hannah!Thanks Hannah!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-47779669993670299672012-10-19T11:25:46.871+13:002012-10-19T11:25:46.871+13:00Wow, you got me going there, Natasha. I thought &#...Wow, you got me going there, Natasha. I thought 'Did this actually happen to Natasha, lol. You caught my imagination!!Mrs Lowehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03748840191381019838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-76235074878172271452012-10-18T18:24:53.775+13:002012-10-18T18:24:53.775+13:00Awesome Tash!
I love your story.
Keep up the GREAT...Awesome Tash!<br />I love your story.<br />Keep up the GREAT work.<br />WELL DONE:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-24466041449127142162012-10-18T16:43:43.541+13:002012-10-18T16:43:43.541+13:00Thank you Casey!Thank you Casey!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-21837358343599245782012-10-18T16:43:25.805+13:002012-10-18T16:43:25.805+13:00Thanks Courts!Thanks Courts!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-48115606490629219332012-10-18T16:42:35.129+13:002012-10-18T16:42:35.129+13:00Thanks Amy!Thanks Amy!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-41790895284501829172012-10-18T08:55:22.283+13:002012-10-18T08:55:22.283+13:00Awesome writing I like the the words you were usin...Awesome writing I like the the words you were using.<br />Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-68622579741734650152012-10-18T08:52:46.055+13:002012-10-18T08:52:46.055+13:00Awesome Natasha
I love the writing it makes you ...Awesome Natasha <br /><br />I love the writing it makes you feel like you are really there when you read it. It was a a twist of a story. Cool! <br /><br />Courtney :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-24617167023819107482012-10-18T07:51:06.035+13:002012-10-18T07:51:06.035+13:00Wow Natasha. Your storys keep getting better and ...Wow Natasha. Your storys keep getting better and better. It felt like it real. Great work. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-4515938349835502032012-10-18T07:47:36.649+13:002012-10-18T07:47:36.649+13:00Thank you so much!
I really enjoyed writing this s...Thank you so much!<br />I really enjoyed writing this story:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-12780722375378277052012-10-18T07:46:45.823+13:002012-10-18T07:46:45.823+13:00Thanks Katrina!
I don't know it would be prett...Thanks Katrina!<br />I don't know it would be pretty disgusting. What about you?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-16835546182144763662012-10-17T18:59:40.513+13:002012-10-17T18:59:40.513+13:00I loved the beginning of your story, Natasha. You...I loved the beginning of your story, Natasha. You really captured my attention with your description of the beach and the day. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-82542127223933864792012-10-17T17:42:03.643+13:002012-10-17T17:42:03.643+13:00Thanks Floss!Thanks Floss!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-71938076413048165842012-10-17T17:30:14.420+13:002012-10-17T17:30:14.420+13:00Amazing story Tash!
I was so interested in reading...Amazing story Tash!<br />I was so interested in reading it that I couldn't stop reading!<br />Keep up the great work!<br />GREAT WORK!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2699672087887884762.post-68423823181607908972012-10-17T17:19:10.800+13:002012-10-17T17:19:10.800+13:00Wow Natasha. Great story I love it:) What if this ...Wow Natasha. Great story I love it:) What if this happened in real life to you what would you do?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com